Her elegance is like shimmering night,
as the night pass it makes moon scream
Effect of her hallow makes everything bright,
Those flickering light propels her in my dream
Every morning as sun kisses her feet,
like an exquisiteness of the wine
When ever the rays and her beauty meet,
make my heart glow on thought tht she is mine
Every time I look into her eyes,
serenity captivates and makes me numb
The so called level falls from the skies,
blocking the senses making it dumb
Mole above the lips, delicacy of her brow,
It's Soft, it's placid still its eloquent
The smiles that wins any heart and makes it glow,
a nice doll whose love is innocent
Something is there which is shoving my ears,
alarms me as that cacophonous scream
Now it seems everything is clear,
time to go for college, thats end of my DREAM...!!
Hope to see her in reality soon :) waise Nice expression of thoughts
ReplyDeleteNice work Ayush but it seemed some distractions were there when you wrote it... you got lost in your thoughts at that time it is really nice to see the flow of words but then you got too lost in it and you were reminded of the stark reality .... The ending could have been better.. but the initial part is really good. I could imagine things going on and the depth of your feelings! So I hope to see the transition into reality pretty soon.
ReplyDeleteNice... all i'll say is can we really wait fr such a girl to enter our life? If yes then how long, and if not then can we have anything else that will keep motivating us to achieve our best specially something we plan to do together in future.
ReplyDeleteEventually, we gotta come outta our dreams. Its time to live in reality. I,these days, personally, have noticed that there're very less and little things that we expect to take place in future, that too as per our aspirations. Dreams are just dreams. They barely and seldom turn to reality. Hope I am not offending.