Wednesday, September 7, 2011

Redemption 1.0



It is just a reflection of my perplexion
like an occult of past, hovering around
still having staunch belief of my redemption
and my mind starts arguing on weird ground

Mind, o mind evertime i try to tame u
ur behavoiur becomes bit uncanny
u ruin urself by ur own thoughts though
makes me feel that somewhere i had lost my identity

Identity,o identity searched u in d bottle of colours
everytime i took a dip, i got lost
exasperation surrendered found addition of new gloss
result took time leads to frustration as a cost

Time, o time why u are my biggest competitor
fighting with you never makes me feel better
because don't understand why i m alwayz a looser
still the rigor makes me smile irrespective of rigour

Mind, identity and time m exonerated by d Resurrection
because I m too tired to search in between d barb
i know somewhere beneath it lies my redemption
this only restrict me to end up this crap.

4 comments:

  1. its not gud but awesum..i am thankul to u for presenting me a beautiful stuff..it happens so many days since i havent get opporunity to write an appraisal note..nd that too delightfully.

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  2. @hemant sir....seriously sir i am highly obliged to have your comment.... this is 2nd time ever u liked my any writings and it matters a lot to me.....thank you a lot sir...!!

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  3. few words i really liked....in terms of relativity...mind*time*identity*resurrection*redemption...

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  4. @shashy thanks frnd..... i was knowing ki tere ko yeeh sahi lagega...!!

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